First Run

dreamcartel

This was my first run on Logic Pro X with drambo as sequencer . Please let me know what was good, what I could add, and if you want to just make any comment at all , that would be cool too.

https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/GMrNtXBuEXWByLh49

(I tried again to embed it, but I can’t figure this out!)

jdp000

Cool track! I liked some of the filter sweep stuff towards the end.

dreamcartel

Thanks a lot man; I’m sorry but a whole layer of strings is missing! The entire track must’ve been muted. (I have to reupload!)

Paulieworld

Nice track. I’d love to hear it with the strings. I tried embedding it and it appears to work. The URL is pretty long. That might be something to look into. My URLs are usually just “https//soundcloud.com/paulieworld/song-title”. For this example I had to leave out the colon otherwise it tried to embed a nonexistent URL.

On my iPad I just held down for a second or two, then released. Then I did it again and got an option to Copy. Then I just pasted it into the post. Don’t feel bad. It took me a while to figure this stuff out! This is my first iPad.

dreamcartel

@Paulieworld said:
Nice track. I’d love to hear it with the strings. I tried embedding it and it appears to work. The URL is pretty long. That might be something to look into. My URLs are usually just “https//soundcloud.com/paulieworld/song-title”. For this example I had to leave out the colon otherwise it tried to embed a nonexistent URL.

Thanks Paulie
Here it is with strings

the first section was removed because it was overwhelming
please let me know if you like the addition

reezygle

Nice track. The mix sounds good.

My recommendation is to make the intro less abrupt and add some variation through the track. Perhaps some variations in the bass line throughout the song.

dreamcartel

@reezygle said:
Nice track. The mix sounds good.

My recommendation is to make the intro less abrupt and add some variation through the track. Perhaps some variations in the bass line throughout the song.

Yea! Thank you. When I pumped it up, I thought the bass could use a little more change up …

And yes, thank you, I will work on more of a crescendo and build up too.

[variations …great , thanks for the feedback reezygle]

Paulieworld

@dreamcartel said:

@Paulieworld said:
Nice track. I’d love to hear it with the strings. I tried embedding it and it appears to work. The URL is pretty long. That might be something to look into. My URLs are usually just “https//soundcloud.com/paulieworld/song-title”. For this example I had to leave out the colon otherwise it tried to embed a nonexistent URL.

Thanks Paulie
Here it is with strings

the first section was removed because it was overwhelming
please let me know if you like the addition

I like it. There's nothing wrong with "overwhelming". Just for comparison, would you care to post that version?
I'd like to hear it.